How the Oil Tanker Took Our Lives
We set sail that day on the fourth of may in our submarine made of clay
.
The engines were hot the dogs name was spot and the cargo we had was a lot
.
They told us to stay and wait in the bay but with a submarine I dear say
,
we must play.
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So we picked up the anchor and strolled past the tanker as silent as an investment banker
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As the water grew deeper our spirits grew cheaper and we forgot to push ‘way the grim reaper
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Now every night I sing what I write in hopes that you’ll hear what I say and make sure you stay behind that tanker in the bay
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I really like the visual formatting. Using the punctuation as a line spacer, very nice.